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Morning light touched your fingers,
Those fingers that rested on my shoulder
While you drifted among sleep-filled seas
And beautiful, enchanting dream.

I watched as the light drifted through the window. Just like a photograph, it was, but for your peaceful breath. It was that time of the morning where even consciousness is mixed with dreams, where the most innocent of thoughts spawns wild and fantastic iterations of ideas. There is something comforting about watching someone sleep. Feeling their fingers clench ever so slightly to some unknown, somniferous stimulus.
Some people don't like to sleep close to someone else. I'm not one of them. Those tangles of sleep, legs wrapped around one another, arms sliding under t-shirts and pyjama tops and out through shared sleeves make my spine tingle. Even skin seems too much of a barrier between you and I. I want to share my arms, fingers, my breath with you.
I watched the morning progress. The first people out on the streets soon appeared, walking under the window, breaking the tranquillity with inquiries after general health. I watched you stir as a slight breeze found its way through the window, making the hair on your forearms prickle. As the hustle and bustle grew, you became more restless, your lips and cheeks twitching and your brow creasing. Your fingers gripped at my t-shirt so gently, and you awoke. Your eyes opened, and that one instant, your pupils softly focusing, your fingertips on my chest: it was poetry. It was a whole lifetime condensed into one single, perfect moment.
©2004-2009 ~gid
:icongid:

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thoughts on a morning

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:icon1220writing:
....wow.... i LOVE this.... i can picture everything. and i wish i could relate. It makes me sad that i cannot relate. :( i feel lonley now, but it isn't your fault. That was a beautiful prose and it's just all the feelings that ive been wishing i had latley.


Thanks for sharring that. You Rock!

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:iconlynnternity:
There is something comforting about watching someone sleep. Feeling their fingers clench ever so slightly to some unknown, somniferous stimulus.

I'm speechless. I swear that when I mouthed those words my throat dried up and I couldn't swallow. I know I've written the first part in my journals before and it's always felt only half finish....the second sentence completed the thought...the feeling so well. You truly described this moment as though it was happening right in front of me, you, everyone. There is something magical in the rise and fall of the chest, the intake of air....for being left speechless I'm sure saying a lot aren't I? lol. Well done hun. :grin:

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:: All eyes turned up to the hero,
Charismatic animal man,
Lyrical visionary caught in the spotlight,
The more you make, the more you get it right, right? ::
:iconsilencemysoul:
Stunning.. I'm lost for words.. truly magical, I remember back to passion filled days when I had such experiences. The description is beautiful, it creates a vivid image. Too much good stuff in here to pick favourite lines, so a :+fav: will have to suffice. Great work.

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:iconstarsplitter:
Wow the descriptions you use I can't find a word to say how good they are :giggle: Its lovely and I love the way you write about sleep. I really like it when things like that come through in pieces.

<3
:icongid:
aw thank you so much :)

i looked through your gallery, and you write beautifully.

and, don't feel sad because you can't relate. i feel lonely because it's something i can relate to all too well.
:icongid:
:cuddle:

thank you. a lot.
:icongid:
thank you very much :) i appreciate it.
:icongid:
:hug: thank you. i'm glad you liked it :)
:icondrkangl:
You have such a remarkably beautiful soul dear. This is lovely

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Don't waste your time on me
You're already a voice inside my head
:icongid:
aww thank you :hug: you're too kind.

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